Need opinions

[Pope]

I have been working on a book for a few years now and am getting close to the end. I am going to post the first two chapters and would like some opinions on it. Either good or bad don't matter but please explain what you do and don't like. I am looking for constructive critizem.

I realize it is not going to be the type of book everyone will like so if it doesn't intrest you no worries.

 

[Pope]

Deleted to protect. Thank you to all who read.

 

[Pope]

Deleted to protect. Thank you to all who read.

 

[Pope]

Deleted to protect. Thank you to all who read.

 

[Shaun]

wow,i used to write myself and you have talent my friend,no kidding..I was totally absorbed in it..i wouldnt mind a copy when its done myself...

 

[Hypnotiq]

I'm gonna write a novel about the diary of a racer it will have a beginning a middle and an end.

 

[frddyj]

I'm gonna write a novel about the diary of a racer it will have a beginning a middle and an end.

i like the r/c theme to it :hpisfgreen:

 

[Pope]

wow,i used to write myself and you have talent my friend,no kidding..I was totally absorbed in it..i wouldnt mind a copy when its done myself...

Thanks. If it is ever printed I will send you a copy.

Jr be sure to let us know how that goes.